WOW ok hi. its been two years since i first used this website and at least a year since i updated the elements demise (wow. how time flies). i dont think anyone still cares but i figured i might as well put it out there? im never (EVER) updating the elements demise (ever. ever ever) again. looking back on it, it was really poorly written, the plot was constantly changing, and it really was pretty boring. just a bunch of horses getting killed in weird ways. not very interesting (if you do

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So the last two chapters can't been seen because I unpublished them. I'm re-doing them.
It may take awhile because FiMfiction hates me at the moment. It won't let me do a bunch of stuff, including saving. I sent out a message so hopefully it will be fixed or I'll realize whatever I'm doing wrong soon.
Sorry again for the really long delay.

Sorry for not updating in a long time. I've had a lot of stuff going on.
I'm going to do a lot of editing on the last few chapters. Like, a LOT. I highly recommend that when I'm done you reread the last three or four chapters.
I have no idea when I'll be done.

I would also like to say thank you to all the people who have pointed out what could be better, and the people who have praised my work. You guys are really helping me become a better writer.

It's chapter 14, right?

Yeah. it'll be done soon. Right now it's past 2,000 words so I'll be wrapping it up soon. Probably be finished around tomorrow.

Sorry for the long wait! I know, I'm a horrible person. I'm sorry. I just haven't been so creative lately.

Oh, yeah. If there are any artistic fans of my story out there, would you mind drawing a bit of art? I'd love to use some of your guy's art as the picture thing-ma-jig for the story!

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Guys, really sorry for the super long wait.
Was it really long? I'm not sure, I haven't really been keeping track of time. I'm assuming that it was long, though.
Anyway, the new chapter is about 100 words short of my goal for every chapter to be and I'm sure it needs more than a little editing. I rushed on it, okay? I'll probably look back over it this weekend, add a few things, fix a few mistakes.

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It shall be coming out soon. I'm not sure if I will get it done today, but I'll try. It's at about 840 words, and I make sure to have all of the chapter at or above 2,000. So, there's a small chance it will be done today. Sorry for the delay, I've had schools tuff going on, and a few other issues that have put me in a lot of stress.

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Ok so, just like, a little post concerning the tenth chapter.
Food: Out Of Order is yes, short, and yes, pretty uneventful.
The title was just something that related to the story sort of, to tell the truth I really just couldn't come up with a better one.
So, just so no one freaks out or something, this chapter is meant to be uneventful.
it's like... a build up thing, sort of.
Like, the calm before the storm. I guess.

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Ahem. Ok. So, again, sorry for the wait. I'm working on chapter 10 currently. It should be done soon, maybe tonight. Not sure.
Anyway, I would just like to say, that the story will be coming to an end, soon. Very soon.
Also, thanks to a lot of people who actually read the whole story, and enjoyed it! I saw it got up on featured stories for a bit. That made me real happy.

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UUUUUUUUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhh.

I really should be working on it.
Really.
Why am I not working on it?
Oh, because I'm lazy.
And have writer's block. Somewhat.

Guys, guys.
Guys.
I'm sorry, really.
I'll get to it, and try to get it done by, like, Thursday.
or something.

Uuuuummmmm
it might be kind of short... Or shorter than the previous chapters...

If you haven't noticed, the longest chapters are one's when you actually 'witness' the murder.

uh...

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Seems cool. I might as well use it.
Anyway, if anyone is getting antsy about me finishing editing the story soon, I am almost done. I'm on the last chapter and I just have to figure out what kind of torture I'm going to select...

Hah. Just kidding, I'm going to use several types. Mostly original, if not based off Chinese tortures, which are the best!

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