No complaining or any negative feedbacks. Also not a positive feedback. Just only pointed to some errors...
"Just sing here and she's all yours!" the lady smiled and gave him a white paper which looked like a contract. He didn't bother reading and signed away and with that, the lady left.
and others sentences.
I think there are many beta readers read and found errors in your chapter. So, I decided to deleted it. btw, I never see any story that OC pony become a daughter of creator when set story in the Earth.
2043260 yeah i try to make new things :D
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No complaining or any negative feedbacks. Also not a positive feedback. Just only pointed to some errors...
and others sentences.
I think there are many beta readers read and found errors in your chapter. So, I decided to deleted it.
btw, I never see any story that OC pony become a daughter of creator when set story in the Earth.
I see you deleted your comment on "My Little Ponysona," but what was it you said?