Darker Color!! Thanks for criticism · 8:37pm Sep 28th, 2018
Now I like criticism so the people that did criticize thanks that’s actually what I was looking for, now the most common thing I saw people complain about was how fast the story escalated!! Well darker color was more of a test trying to find what kind of response I would get ((Also I know I’m bad at punctuation XD)) so yeah I’ll work on that
~Drako out