I have remove my story from FimFiction.net. I have done this for two reasons: An apparent "Admin Knows Best" mentality, and the lack of user input concerning site management.

Admin Knows Best

knighy (http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/17708)
"Doesn't work. Even if it was the best change ever people would just say no anyway. Sometimes I just have to suck it up and do what I know is best for the site even if I have to put up with 100 people hating me for a while."

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I've posted a revised chapter one. Thank you to Demetrius from the Ponychan training grounds and SteelTalons. I've also added a few paragraphs on terraforming to "Notes and Miscellaneous" on Google Docs.

I've uploaded a cleaned up copy of Chapter 3. Thank you SteelTalons for your help. Expect to see more revisions for all chapters in the future.

Wrapping up the first draft of Chapter 3. It's posted on Google Docs so feel free to read it. Commenting is enable so mark it up.

Some more of work done on chapter 3.

I'm half way through with Chapter 3, and I've updated and added to the Notes folder. If you can't wait and want to read what I have Ch. 3 is in the Incomplete Chapter folder. Just follow my Google Docs link.