Edited the chapters I have written and am almost ready to put the next one at I have a number chapters I create and then I just edit them.

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Hahaha Yeah. I'm glad you're taking the time to make sure everything is good. That's the sign of a good writer!

The next chapter I'm writing is taking time as a good chuckof it is made up and I'm trying to make sure I remove any run-in sentences,but make it seem like the chapter is believable.

Here is what Nightmare Moon and her sister Daybreaker look like as anthro's the next chapter once I'm done editing it in my story will have some back story to Daybreakers and Nightmare Moon and there past but this is what they look like and both of them will fall in love with Telwyn and be the main pairing. cdn-img.fimfiction.net/story/e3bj-1432483187-101506-medium