The 23^th chapter in the story is a long one and still working on it as fast I can go. So just bear with me while I write this update to see whats going on lately. You know me I don't like to give out spoilers on the details until I upload a chapter. So I can only say that is there will be a fight for the City element.

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After you folks telling me to find an editor. I'm doing all that I can hear on my own. If there is someone out there can want to help me with the story and maybe later ones down the line.

Just shoot me a message or comment on my profile page to let me know what we can do.

I thought it over between uploading chapters 17^th and 18^th to think about what I want to do with the story. So I will keep it going until the story ends. Now I have a lot to learn being my first story and all the feedback I got from it. Let me asks you this. Did you ever get it right the first time doing anything?

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The story that I have been working on is a part of a bigger story. For everyone that is in the story and those that will come in the later stories. I can't say much about them because I still working on the nine worlds story. So that will be come at a later date.

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Before I release the 5^th chapter I be major editing on it and the other chapters of the story. So this may or may not make delay the chapter to next week maybe.

I be using the Old Gateway for editing for now on. Microsoft word I have here will help out on that. I just somethings I write on it will be a little different the way I write and talk. So keep an eye out on that. That is all I have for now. This James Cribb signing out.

I have been working on the story on my computer before I put them on the site and Deviantart page. I'm up to 16 chapters in the story. You thnking like where are they. Because I have uploaded them. Because of the format that I use on my computer and here on my site. That maybe on the site itself. Now I'm not compating. It just takes a litttle longer on editing the story to the format used here. At lease the editing can giving me a change to read the chapter and rewrite where plot elements that

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The nine worlds of Omega is very different from the world of Earth and the world of Equestria. For one this world technology is highly advanced then anything anything on Earth. A lot more then Equestria. Gateways, telporters, 3D frabgatters of liquid metal and many other things that this world feel more alien from someone from Earth or Equestria. Now for the worlds it self.

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After a few days on here with the 3^th chapter release yesterday. Most of feedback was deint, The story as 6 thumds down and one mean comment on there. Now I'm not going to get me down, Because I'm still new on here finding the site a few weeks ago and read a few stories. Now I know there are going to be someone who's going to talk trash on your work. If it don't stick to you. Then there is nothing to worry about. There is someone at likes the story and put on there favorites list.

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The story for the Nine Worlds Of Omega is a go. Chapters will be coming out as fast I can write them. Its just a quick update from earlier today after I get the good news in my mail box.

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I'm sill waiting for the go head for the first chapter to be put on here. I had to change some things around from the systile when I
wrote it up on my computer. So be ready for that. I did put the first and the second chapters on my deviantart page. I had to turn the on something. Becuase on what happens in the later chapters of the story. So if can wait for it to be on here then go there.

Devantart page: click here to move on.

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