I reached the word count I was happy with yesterday and spent the rest of the day and today editing. I was pretty excited about the end part of this chapter, hopefully you will be too.

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This chapter should delve a bit more into what is going on. More action than the introduction. A lot of Celestia and Luna if you enjoy those characters.

On a writing note, I'm working on my show don't tell. If you see any poor examples inside this chapter feel free to point them out!
Same goes for any tensing issues. (Really hope to find a pre-reader/editor soon)

Hope you all enjoy!

This is my first blog post and I'm going to start publishing a story. It is called Shattered Equestria: Jagged Reflections. I invite anyone to comment, like, dislike, and enjoy it.

I'll be relying on you to help me improve! Please leave comments with things you want improved. Did a character not quite live up to their natural psychology? Spelling errors? Please point them out!

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