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Oh well, it was worth a shot. I could go through and try to fix whatever minute errors they are talking about, but......nah.

Ladies, Gentlemen, Fillies, Gentlecolts, and other, good news is here.

Chapter 4 is done. It should be up sometime today(meaning Sunday) after editing is done. At this point, my goal is one chapter a week.

Fillies and Gentlecolts, I fear we have a problem.

No, this is not a 'I'm discontinuing the story' problem, but it is a rewrite problem. Last night, while desperately attempting to force myself to sleep, of course my mind was flooded with random thoughts. One of them concerned this story, and one comment I recieved sometime shortly after it was first published. The comment was something along the lines of 'Is it just Gohan going to Equestria?'

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Okay, so I have good news, and I have bad news.

Good news first; Chapter 3 is almost complete. All I need to do is a little bit of editing and it should be ready.

Now the bad news; My computer has a virus which continues to shut it down every 2 minutes and I'm going to have to have it serviced and probably restored to factory settings. I WAS able to save my story outline and Chapter 3 to Fimfiction. However, I won't be able to finish the work on chapter 3 until then.

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