Wow, I'm a dick. · 2:47am Dec 12th, 2013
Just got to say, I've written fan-fiction. Gotta say, your layout is shit. Indents are fine, amazing actually. However your paragraphs and dialog isn't separated very well. I suggest separating it more. Hit the enter key a second time between each bit of dialog and context so it looks more appealing to read. I guarantee you that people find the current layout annoying. I find it annoying, and I know not to judge from appearance through experience. But as of now, this story looks