Don’t worry the Mama Applejack chapter will stay this time (I had several problems with that so just want you to know)

Sorry to anyone who saw the update on ‘Luna mother of Twilight Sparkle’ I write these stories on Fimfiction it’s self and somehow I hit publish on the chapter and didn’t realize

I need someone to proofread the first chapter a story I'm writing (mostly with commas) and maybe others in the future (I also need to know how I link it or something else)