With the series over we can finally get back to our lives.
As for what I thought about the finale?
Here's a quick spoiler free summery.
Proof reader wanted.
Warning! No content warnings per se but uh... it's some pretty rough writing.
I don't want fixes for the obviously broken stuff. Just grammar, story consistency and to tell me if the song works without knowing the music I set it to in my head.
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I saw a glimpse of the latest episode a few weeks ago from a leak
semi spoilers
I thought the premise was going to be 'oh no we didn't find a chaperone, what do you mean we're old enough to go by ourselves'
*pull back to show them as slightly older as the mane 6 see them and they've just pictured themselves as still young*
'now WE'RE the chaperones. I hope no crazy antics that will show us what we used to be like to our sisters will happen to us'
So I've recently been writing. Not good writing. Forced writing for the sake of making myself write again.
The story so far has a few bits of 'then something that's not really important happened for three hours until the next scene worth writing took place' and 'I don't know what to write here so I'm not, moving on' and a character who name is <horse book pun name> who is from there after [like 4 times and she'll never show up again] referred to as HBPN.
Story idea: The Young 6 but they're arseholes.
Original I know!
But seriously, have you seen an anime called Haganai?
Well TL;DR it's a harem animu but everyone is worse then Always Sunny characters.
My idea is Sandbar is the guy [whose name I don't remember] and Ocealus is the main girl [whose name I don't remember but she's the best girl... at least out of the legal ones] and the whole backstory with her SPOILERS is that she, as a changeling, was secretly Sandbar's childhood friend.
After 3 long years I've finally written a new story...
It's time for the moment you've been waiting for!
Dah. da da da da da dah...
Di di da da da da da da dadadadadah…
dadada da da da dah
da dadalada da da da da dah da dah da da dah *small breathe*
da dada da dada da dah tsss
da dadadadada dah da dah da dah
di dadi di dadi di dadi dadilidada dadilidada dadilidada da dah
di dadili didadili lida dah
dedodili *heavy breathing*
Because I will never write it in full and proper [and because I honestly don't have anything beyond the starting premise] here's another story idea I have.
Ok, set up is this.
This is/was a major fandom work back in the day as one of the earlier show-like animations so if you haven't seen it, watch it and if you have you probably haven't watched it in a while so watch it.