This is a WIP story. After I get all the story parts finished, I'll go back and look at the different chapters and make some improvements here and there.
Right now, I'm story-dumping. After that, it's refinement-dumping.
Ok?
Ok.

CoolJoke Song of the Post:

Aww, this had potential.

1. New chapter for Christmas. Go check it out.
2. Five likes. Huh, people do care about this. Woohoo.

There we go.

Cool Song of the Post:

I posted copyrighted song lyrics.
I'm changing them RIGHT NOW (as I write this sentence) to at least be changed enough to be considered fair use.
Please check them, and if you believe they aren't fair use, TELL ME.

Chapter 3 will not be available for a short time. Chapter 3 has been changed to make some more correlations to the MLP universe, and it has also had minor improvements in pacing.

Thanks.

Song of the Post:

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I'm releasing 5.

I don't care.

And now, a random conversation about the brony fandom:
I haven't really had time to be somewhat noticed. So, just like everywhere else except in UndrDogz, I don't matter.
Am I supposed to care? No.
Should I? I don't know.
I want someone to give me actual, textual, constructive feedback to my story.
Is that going to happen? No.
Should I hope? I don't know.

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I shouldn't worry about this.
Just keep making chapters and fanfiction and everything will be alright, right?
So, forget the last post. Actually, I'm DELETING it.

If you don't know what I said, here you go:

I know now that nobody cares about my fanfiction anymore.
I waited too long, and everyone has moved on.
Unless people start showing this fanfic to their friends (which I know nobody would ever do), this fanfic will just be dust in the wind.

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Release a chapter, get a bunch o' views and possibly a like/dislike or two. Don't release a chapter in a timely fashion, and nobody cares anymore.

Welp, I know what to do now. Kinda.

Song Of The Post:

Only put it on there because of the intro, shut up.

I'm at 4 likes so far, but hey, it's only two likes away from 6. And when you're dealing with numbers, nothing really matters.

I'm releasing the 4th chapter. This does NOT mean the other two will be released soon, although 5 is pretty much done, but it does mean you're getting a special 25 Days 'Till Christmas present.

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I see a pattern.
Whenever I goof up, I get a dislike. When I goof up badly, I get a vocal dispraise for it.
When I do something right, I get no comment. Just a like. Nobody tells me what they liked of it. It's just like YouTube. I'm only a filler.

So, after I fix Chapter 1, I'm done. I'm going to leave 780 on hold. Once I get 6 likes, I'll get back in.

So yes. 780 is now on hiatus. And no-one will give a crap and I won't give a crap.
Until someone starts giving a crap, I won't.

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Number one is weak.

I just got notified via Reddit that someone doesn't like my fanfic.
And I got to thinking.
Maybe it's high-time to change the paragraphing.

So, I'm pulling Chapter 1 off the shelf to fix it. I'm also changing the not-actually-published chapters 4 and 5 where I tried to go back to that to revert that going-back.

Also, I'm putting a notice on the story to NOT READ IT RIGHT NOW. IT IS BROKEN. YOU CAN'T READ IT RIGHT NOW.

Thanks for putting up with this.

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I feel like the ending is a bit weak and could get some work done.

The chapter is now offline until the new ending is up.

In the meantime...

ELTON JOHN EVERYBODY