hi i'm just asking if anypony might read my stuff and help if it need's gramer fixing and spelling check

in unrelated work it might say i'm online but it's because i don't log out (i forget)

i'm finishing a story i'm wrighting i would like if somepony pre reades it it like a 1st person view or something like that

i'm deside to change my pic once in a while

going to try to make a 2nd person story

i need help on grammer and spelling

hope you like my story it's sad and the shipping is slow
don't resist criticising me the more the bettter oh and i'm a bad speller so tell me were i get it spelled wrong and how it's soposed to be writen

this story will be connected to the other one's i will make and please give me ideas on what type of pony i sould ship with Rarity, Applejack and rainbow dash oh and pinky pie

i have found a good story to wright it will reveal the truth

I can't decide what to wright.