I need proof reader for my adventure in Equestria chapter 20 on if you want to be proof pm me

I am sorry that chapter 20 is not up yet I just hit a writer block if you read every chapter in my adventure in Equestria I did a back story to Fleur de Lis were she close to death only way she can stay alive if she marry the chosen now she fall in love with a captain of the Lunar guards now she have to make a choice to marry him then leave him with the chosen one come or stay single until the chosen one come if you have any idea how should I do this leave a commit below next thing I am

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I am watchin tmnt 2 right now Chapter 20 will up on Tuesday now because I have school tomorrow and I am trying get this chapter done asap

I know that I said last week chapter 20 will be up it look like it will be up on Monday but no promise I hope that you all enjoy my story so far once I am done with this story I will stop for two month to think what my story is going to be but not promise that I will tell you want is next story what going to be all I going to say right now it going to be human in Equestria

I am almost done with chapter 20 it should be up sometime this week but no promise. you might know I am a twin like the spa twins on Tuesday night I arrive at my dad house I check out my twin cell phone it look nice once turn on the screen on his phone next thing I know that he have picture of Scootaloo and Rainbow dash hug I ask him about it he told me that he like the show I said I can not judge I show him my screen of Sunset Shimmer I ask him how long he was brony he said since season 1

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Still working on chapter 20 do not when it will be up yet

I will work on my adventure in equestria later night I have it up tomorrow but no promises

for those who are in serve military thank you service thank you and those who are over seas come back safe
brohoof

if you read chapter 13 I use Scribbler have great story here on this sit and do fan fiction reading on youtube and Jared and Joey from pony meet world and weird alicorn and Austin Lanham they will return in chapter 20 or later in later in other chapter there are more to come until next time everypony brohoof.

When I was writing this story I want use Nightmare Moon but not in a way we all know in the show I chance it up to make her confess mare that want to know who is her father but I make it short in chapter 8 in chapter 9 half Kelly find out that Nightmare Moon is his daughter before the fight with prince Blueblood Nightmare moon already know that princess Luna is her mother. I might put chapter 20 as the final back story for Fleur De Lis I am not sure yet I am hope that I can finish this

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