hey guys.
I know i keep saying this EVERY time but im sorry the next chapter is taking so long to write.

This one is turning into a monster and may have to be split into two so not to rush and spoil it. And with my job taking my every waking moment up at the moment... Lets just say I'm getting annoyed.
On a personal note, I'm having a hard time actually writing what I have planned for the smart mouthed pegasus. All I will give out is it will be very dark.

Anyway...

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guys im sooooo sorry about the silly long time between updates.
long story short, I been through hell last few months.
Was caught in a car crash that left me... well messed up.
at least im Ok now and got this thing done at last.
again i am sooo sorry I'm taking so long with these.

well since my last chapter was uploaded ive been swamped with both life and work.
I mean seriously, I'm bearly getting enough time to sleep atm.
Still after calling in a favour, i got an evening off work and began the next chapter. Went pretty well too!

With 10k down, unrevised still but hey, Im making progress and im hopeful i can get a few days off to get it finished.
had one bad issue, google drive crashed and I lost all i had wrote...

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at loooooong last i got the chapter up there for you guys. its a pretty rough edit and needs a little tlc but i hope it was worth the wait.
also, thanks for getting me on the front page, even for a little while :D

Ive tried to get some added to the 4k i had written and... i went a little crazy.
the chapter is up to just over 15k in one day and looks pretty sweet.
I'm expecting a pile of hate over my plans for the smart ass colt but this is my story to tell, and this is my way to tell it :D
hope to have the rough edit up soon and the edit as soon as the great and powerful deathtap has time to check it over.

with the halfterm weeks, bank holidays and my boss being a moron. ive had exactly two hours i could actually write in.
as such, im WAAAAAAAY behind what i want to be at in the chapter. but with almost six whole hours in the next 2 days free. im gonna try to get an unedited version finnished up for you guys.
also please excuse my horrific spelling, ive just finished my 7th 16 hour shift on the bounce....
tired pony alert lol.
now sleep...

Raven has finally uploaded the chapter of her story to her own account.
As such, I removed it from my own account.
any who want to read more, look her up on her Ravensong account.
its gonna be epic.

Raven has begun writing chapter 2 of her story at last!!!
As a fan of her story im excited and as a noob/budding writer shes used me as a soundboard for her storys ideas.
It is going to be amazing!
Ive not been this excited about a fic sinse Brotherhood and heroes updated!
if any of [yea right i wish] my fans liked the story, keep watching her account as this will be amazing!

ok i know the uploaded chapter was kind of rough so now its been replaced with the polished and edited version!
once again thank you o Deathtap for his amazing skills.

new chapter is up. its rough edited so expect mistakes until the talented deathtap gives it a once over.
enjoy and please dont hate me for what happens....