How would you say the new story is going so far? Anything you want to see? Anything you want me to avoid?

Go ahead and tell me!

Edit: Would someone like to become an editor? I would appreciate the ability to bounce ideas against someone else, and to catch some of the mistakes I miss. Thanks!

So should I just delete this story and remake it?

I mean, I already have like five or six chapters that I could copy over to the new story place thing.

It would get it to you faster.

I just wish that I hadn't unsubmitted this one, that was dumb of me.

Anyway, what do you think? let me know.

After thinking about what some of you have said, I have to agree. I made a rookie mistake, and made the Overlord way too strong way too fast, and for that I'm sorry.

I also made little effort to show what the others thought about the Overlord.

The story will go down for a bit, but don't worry! I'm not quitting! The story will not go down forever! It's not dead/dieing!

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It seems like every time I sit down to actually wright, bam! Blue screen of death!

I've lost a chapter two times already, halfway both times, just before I can save...

So now I have decided to release a chapter every time I reach the end of a chapter that is three in sequence after the one being released.

So every third chapter that is written.

Why didn't I say that in the beginning? Why keep it?

Why not?

I have run out of steam.

I have an overall idea of how the story will go, but making it work is harder than I thought.

In light of this, I will be taking some time to think, and make some more chapters as a buffer. This will unfortunately slow the chapters down, but I want to make a good story, not just a long one.

Also, to those who keep complaining about grammar and spelling, if you would like to become editors then I would welcome the help, just PM me.

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My computer is crapping out, so chapters will probably be slower for a while.

I apologize.

Have a cupcake.