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I really could use some constructive input on my story. Thanks to those who have and are reading it. I promise I will update as much as possible, but the way it is going, i think this will be a long story. hopefully everypony enjoys it. :)

Hey everyone, I am looking for either a beta reader, or a collaborator to help me with my fic, Taking back what is ours. I am new to writing this kind of story, but giving it a go. I struggle with dialogue here, and am in need of some help. If you want to help, just message me, and I will get back to you as soon as I can. Thanks, and hope you have a wonderful day or night, whatever time you are reading this.