I need a proofreader to help me write my stories faster. More people that help the better, it's best to get multiple peoples' opinion than just one. I'll put my writing e-mail later.

I'm rewriting Spirit greatly making it a lot long with more descriptions and extra thing. I'm also writing a long story that was inspired by the same thing, and like Spirit it was inspired by mishearing the lyrics. The new story may have a few deus ex machina moments, but hay what can you do. :P

I'll be posting a new story first before I'll post chapter 2 of Spirit and I'll change Spirit a bit.