So the edits to the chapters are now done! It may not look like much, but it's polished and it looks a bit better if you ask me. Comment or PM if there are any sort of mistakes that need to be corrected.

-NickyD

So the edits are not done yet, but holy crap, there are a lot of things that needed fixing! Jeez, I wish someone told me that it could have used another read through! There's spelling, grammar and descriptive holes every chapter. I usually read the chapter three or four times before posting, and there are still errors that I don't pick up on. How is this possible?

The edits are getting there. I'll tell you guys when they are done so you can see the new, freshly polished chapters.

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So before I proceed with the next chapter, I want to go back and edit my previous chapters. I want to go back and flesh them out a little bit. So far, the narration, is a little too simple and not to descriptive. It's more telling and not showing, where as it is supposed to be the opposite (show and not tell). I intend to keep the plot I have already set up the same, but the way I am present it is going to be tweaked so it can look better.

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So I didn't bring my laptop for senior trip...so I did no writing. I am still trying to figure out how I am going to proceed with the chapter I am writing. But on the bright side, I had so much fun on my senior trip in Florida. Being back in Jersey sucks! I wanna go back! Mickey, TAKE ME WITH YOU....a little dramatic there. Sorry. *ahem* I do have some of my photos on my instagram. If you wanna follow me and see a few of my senior tip pics, my instagram username is: MR._MARCH2015. I have a few

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So I have some stuff out of the way, but still haven't found time to get some writing done.

The S.U.R.E. thing was just this Thursday passed and I had a lot of fun with that.

The musical was last week and it was a success. A lot of people are praising me still for doing a good job with being Rapunzel's Prince.

Next Friday is the Comedy Pageant for my school. I still have a bit of work to do for that.

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So have I been writing at all this month...no. I do have some of the next chapter written up, but I haven't found time to get back to it. I've been really busy with the musical. The song is starting to sound really good. Here's the song I have to sing (with someone else of course):

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Okay, so my updates aren't going to be that frequent for quite a few reasons.

1) School: The school work I am getting is starting to pile up a bit. Plus, I am failing a class. Not failing all of my classes, just one. I'm going to try to bring that sinking grade up. And it's Physics, so it's going to be a hassle.

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Item numero uno: I decided to post the next chapter today. If you haven't seen it, give it a read. Don't be afraid to leave some constructive criticism.

Second: I am feeling a lot better now. I just needed to watch a few Vines and I'm good. Also, I saw that new Kevin Hart film, The Wedding Ringer, on Friday and that got my mind off of the situation I put myself in. So just give yourself some sort of positive atmosphere if you're in a dark place and you should feel a lot better.

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I just want to thank my friends and readers who have read my story and have gotten it past the forty like mark. I am SO grateful for all of you guys.

It means a lot because I have been in sort of a dark place this past weekend, and a bit before hand. Coming on this site and talking to my friends here (and in real life), reading the stories, and seeing all of these people support me and my friends brings a smile to my face and has me forget why I'm in this dark place.

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Me singing Always Look on the Bright Side of Life. I hope to post more music soon.

In the meantime, if you like it, share it with you friends, family, that creepy neighbor you have, the squirrel in your local park, etc.