So my story isn't doing too well. 3:3 ratio and first comment was only constructive criticism. Oh well, I guess now I know a part of me that needs work. I'm gonna take down the story for now, revise and rewrite that some of a bitch, and maybe repost it later.

Until then, boo fucking hoo to me.

I'm writing a story, it's an HiE with what I think is an interesting twist to it.

The "may" is still a pretty strong adverb in there, but if I do it'll be a multi-chapter HiE.

I have a neat idea for the basis too, but I'm still kind of thinking it over.

Do you think I should write a story?

Edit: If so, I need suggestions on what kind.

Just so you know, guys/girls, I made this to resemble the character from Dead Space 3, and I'll be resembling as close as I can to his own personality. Not a lot I say will be what I would say, but rather what Carver would say.