MY STORY SUCKS SO FAR! Meh that's for me to expect when I'm new here. I started writing in 2006, stopped in 2008 and continued in 2011. I've been writing in script so long I forgot what it's like to write a fan-fic like a book. Anyway I'm not giving up writing, I'll try to get better. I just need a guide or a tutor or something.

When I said I was gonna post up an entire chapter like 3 - 1,2,3,4 and 5 at the same time...that's not gonna work because as I post a new chapter, i need to know what advice anyone can give me so I can make it stronger.

I've just been busy with some other stuff. But I'm looking for an artist to either draw my characters in more detail and to draw backgrounds about where the situation is taking place, and mostly help me with a better title cover, and especially The Pandemonium Angel Academy look. It's mostly white with some blue and with a steampunk-ish theme with a mix of a futuristic feel, it's big and it has towers. Your choice on how

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The chapter epilogue is coming. I'm not dead. (Not that anyone is reading this) Plus I plan on working on chapter 2 and posting parts of it when it's all done.

Right now I'm thinking about writing a part that uses more of Commander Wrightfield (my oc) and Celestia and a little of Celestia's guards. Other route is the story continues from the mane 6 and the 4 angels and their spirit guide. Hard to choose...

I've written "My little Pandemonium Friendship is Epic for a while and now...I hate it. So I've decided to rewrite it. Using probably a Anime Perspective, in a different style. But I still need to finish "Chapter 5 pt2". OR...I could just skip it and just restart from scratch. Hmmm... Goodbye MLP FIE you pile of garbage. here's what I'm talking about http://kiyoshikouta.deviantart.com/gallery/33540519