I finally got time to sit down and re-edit the first chapter of Equestrian Souls. I fixed a lot of grammar mistakes, and made the story a little more interesting. I also fixed some parts of the first chapter that just didn't work very well. Finally I added an awesome new cover to the story itself. I am planning on doing something similar to the second chapter as well at some point. Anyway's I hope that you all enjoy the story a little more now. XD thanks for the support everypony