Didn't do a good a job on the first part, I kinda rushed it. Wanted to do better on the second part so thought I'd take more time to do it right. What was going to be a search and rescue turned into a simple recovery, then things got complicated reallyquick. Oh cobol! this is going to take longer than I anticipated. Making it loosely fit the canon in my Infinity's Road storyline. I basically took the original chapter and rewrote the story to fit MLP into the events that I had planed for