Yes I'm editing Broken again. As I was working on the sequal for it I noticed some things were not made clear. So I will be editing it a bit more then posting in the wonderverse group when the edits are done.

So I just finished the new ending. I hope this will be a better ending than the last one, as well as be a better lead in for the planned sequel.

So this story is going through some editing, the first edits were small but I'm doing some on and off editing of the story that will hopefully make it better, including re-working the ending.

Note: not all of the edits are finished, most notably the ending. I'm trying to re-plan it so it doesn't end so suddenly.

So I'm planning and trying to finish the first day of Diamond Tiara's day of camp and I'm having trouble coming up with pony names/looks/cutie marks (even if said pony doesn't have them at the time knowing makes it easier as I work with the character)

So I'm looking for OC ideas. Give me name, color scheme, and perhaps a mane and tail style. If your name is picked I'll contact you. Note I'm looking for things off the top of peoples heads and I need a lot of flexability with a character.

Sorry its taking so long to put up the next chapter, its just that I have several ways that I could take it before I get into the real meat of the story.

It doesn't help I have an idea banging around in my head about our favorite Filly Bully (after all everyone loves a villian). This story when it gets out of my system will be one of the few stories I ever do with a theme in mind, but I'm going to be spending a lot of time researching for this fic.

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