Tweaking Chapter 1 · 6:14am Apr 8th, 2012
Hey peeps!
I've been doing a bit of reading and got some new feedback, so I'm gonna be making some tweaks to Chapter 1 of Alanticorn. Nothing major, just some minor tweaks for narrative purposes. Probably give Chapter 2 a bit of a look over too while working on Ch. 3 and an interlude.
Until then, take care.
-Bolt