DIALOGUE.

I noticed, re-reading alot of my stories that my dialogue kind of comes off as forced, will focus on correcting!

any further suggestions for improvement would be greatly appreciated, this is going to be a fun weekend!

You hear lots of static coming from your speakers and in between the breaks you can make out a distressed voice.

"CCCCCRRRSSHHHHHKK..... -ELP.... SSHHHHSHHHHCRRKK.... DOWN, I DON'T KNOW W .. SHH .. I AM, I NEED HELP... CRSHHHSSSHHHH ... WONDERBOLTS ... CCCRSAHSHHHH ... HELP .... SHHHH.... DONT .... CRKKKSHHH ... HOW MUCH ... SHH ... LONGER I CAN ... KKSH ... MAKE IT"

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I WILL finish Derpy Pie (2 more chapters)
I WILL finish MLF : LiF Chapter 3.
I MIGHT do an art stream or might do art regardless.

:D find me on the irc as Pnoy!

Check out my tumblr guys! I uploaded art there if your interested in seeing it! Alot of it's old, my newest one is the pinkamena drawing thats at the top.

No not surprise the pony,

But I decided to poop out another mini-series! Shipping warning!! (Teen rating)

Status bar reflects it accordingly!

Might not seem like much of an improvement, but believe me.... THIS CHAPTER IS LONG.

At least by my standards. But you know whats not long?

This blog post.

Ill use a status bar (Through approximation based on total number of scenes, how many are completed and how many remain to be written.) to keep you guys updated on the latest chapter's progress!

Ill post the status bar near the top of the game info. chapter so be sure to check their REGULARLY

Fell asleep while writing haha :p,
Ended up accidently publishing the unfinished chapter too at some point! Hopefully no one saw :X

sheesh.

Anyways, I am confident in the new base of pre-readers I have to help me deliver awe inspiring stories. Progress of My Little Fortress is fast, but it will take more time than I anticipated. The chapter is going to be LONG so berry the extra wait, and I will deliver.

I plan on this making this chapter something truly special, I really want to be a great author and I think it's time I start trying to be one, Celestia guide me.

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This is specifically for the My Little Fortress series.

My pre-readers have vanished on me and I need more people to pre-read my work before I release it. I am prone to a number of minor mistakes, but even one minor mistake can ruin a story and an author's credibility.

I am still a novice author, and I haven't been writing very long and only started writing because of my infatuation with ponies...

Confound these ponies... They drive me to write about them...

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