Well oh damn. My first story sucked so much that is didn't pass moderation.

Ah well, too bad, AND I WIll PREVAIL!!!

So the story didn't get much flack but my writing style sucked and my "wall of text" also contributed to the suckishness of the story.
So im going to combine the first and the second chapter and space out paragraphs.
But hey, gotta say thanks to the moderators as the layout differs allot from word to the fimfiction text editor.

~NatoMann~