Judging from the criticism on my story, I'm going to take a different route, and try to be... Better. That one story I've written will most likely be the last of it's kind. I shall be moving on to other categories.

I WILL BE EDITING MY ORIGINAL STORY.

How long does it take for a story to be approved?! Anyway, considering all things, I realised that I put too much "fetishy" stuff in my story (A new secret), and made the clop extremely long. I won't be editing it, as I'm going to be busy writing my next story.