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Fero_Mero


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um if this is a site for fanfics how can you get banned from typing a story or saying a comment? Its not right its not like your saying your going to kill somepony come on here we are all bronys love and tolerate thats what we stand from correct?:facehoof:

how did you get banned!? this is total bull! oh and thanks a bunch for the chapter:heart::heart::heart:

DUDE!!! I don't go on FimFiction for about 2 weeks and you get banned, What cunt-juggling pissant banned you?!

Humans have relied on two important animals through out our history, dogs and horses.:twilightoops:
One mans best friend that is loyal and protective.:trollestia:
The other mans gallant steed that crossed the world in exploration and war. :pinkiesad2:
If Frost giving off an aura of the sorts, would the magic that brought him to Equestria have made that spiritual connection take on a invisible call that makes them feel truly loved? :yay::heart:

Well first thanks for messaging me and informing me of the new chapter, it was only a few days ago I was wondering where this had gone off to.
I admire your tenacity to keep this going even in the face of adversity and your commitment to finishing this story. I'll follow your editor and hopefully we'll see some stuff in the future

Now this chapter was good but I did notice some spelling errors here and there, not anything major.Though this is a personal opinion, not a criticism but I thought maybe you gave away to much information. I feel I know exactly what's going to be the conclusion of this story; Probably a long way off of the actual ending just because of the hints you dropped. Of course I could be completely wrong and you'll mind F#ck me in the future, which I really hope because what I have in mind just seems too sad

I made that ending so much worse for myself because i cut to the end about half way through. I was confused at first about the last sentence right until the scene changed to the library and from then on i was muttering "oh god, oh god nonono, don't do, don't walk in!".
I feel somewhat traumatised to say the least and I was just reading it.

Great ending though. You have a way off keeping me wanting to read what the next chapter, just to see what happens

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