the next chapter is going to be darker and somewhat more violent then my last, and I want to make sure that what I am going to include does not exceed teen, though if it does I might have to change my rating to mature, what happens feel right in the flow of the story, and I am unsure how to progress further in the narrative without including it. while its nothing explicit, it does involve adult themes, and is something happens to twilight that really should only be viewed by people who would

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I have some ideas on whats going to happen next, though I am not sure all of them are going to happen in chapter six. I don't want to leave anyone wonder what will happen to twilight? is spike in a dungeon? What was in that salad anyway? too long. plus I have to get Gallant's response to the situation written right, I don't want him to sound like a petulant six year old after all. So I will try and get it out tomorrow, or even *gasp* later tonight if I can get the kinks worked out.

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a New chapter will be coming out sometime today. With my wake up idea being fine tuned in it. while I was at my almost job I had a couple of ideas to fine tune it, things are starting to get more exciting :)

I came up with this idea after putting my daughter to bed, so its still a little rough, but while we did hear about Unicornia and the pegasus nation and the Earth pony nation, it was just assumed that they all became part of Equestria. In the show though we know there are places like Saddle Arabia and Trotting ham, which while are not explicitly stated separate countries from Equestria, the fact that they do host ambassadors from saddle Arabia suggest to me thy are in fact separate countries;

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