FEAR xover is going to be edited · 9:52am May 11th, 2014
Hey, guys, maybe you don't hear so much from me, but here's something I've got to tell you... okay the title said it already.
Here is a little list of the changes:
-Improved grammar, with my 2014 english knowledge. Maybe not perfect aka golden, but WAY better than first.
-Improved end (in grammar).
-Written in past tense, with better grammar.
-Changed here and there some things (No unnecessary Mary Sues *CoughBlack NeedlerCough*)