I cannot think of how to make the first chapter of Friendship is Death any longer...it just feels so damn short for a beginning. All I wanted in that chapter was he get to ponyville and briefly explain his past and get to his victims' house. And I can't seem to stretch that out like what seems like everyone else can. I need idea help.

Oh man peoples' reaction to Friendship is Death is just so funny to me. I guess people can't tell when literally more than half of it was just thrown together with not much thought put into it. So many people telling me I need help and i just laugh at that. Ohhh man, I might be getting a bit too much laughter out of this but I don't give a crap. They can say what they want but I'm still me.

Ok so....it's mr. Flicks job to tell the counselor when he finds things like what I wrote no matter what it's for or why. But now that Ive talked with him, he said its nothing serious just school rules....ok fine ill accept that. But he still has the first page of the story -_- got everything else back just not the first page....great.

so today i found out that because of what i wrote in my story, people think i have mental issues....wtf. i don't have any mental health issues i wrote it and was meaning it to be disturbing, twisted etc. i wrote it to make be people sit there and thing "what the hell did i just read..." -_- thanks alot for telling everyone in the school board Mr. Flick.