I have never written a My Little Pony fanfic before. I'd appreciate all the feedback I can get. Could you, my readers, give me an idea of what you like, what you don't, what areas I could work on, and what works for you?
I have looked over the chapters for my story "From Equestria with Love" and think Chapters 1 and 2 would work better if combined, so the action can start to pick up on Chapter 2. I will edit this in soon.
Apologies to everyone who's already read Chapter 2.