[The Scotsman And The Fashionista 1] Fresh New Look! · 11:30pm Jun 9th, 2014
I have finished editing this story, addressing all the grammar errors that I could find as well as a few incorrect words.
I also deleted the English translation.
Parts 2 and 3 will be edited soon — and, since you're all here, I might as well tell you that Part Four of this series will be released during One-Shotober.