The Tired Automaton is yet another poorly made story by me. Starting like many other stories; brainstorming, writing, rewriting, and rewriting even more. This story however, became such a mess in almost every way that I want to talk about it.

Naming every way the story fails would be a long list that wouldn’t be interesting to you other than learning new terms to label other stories with. Instead I will list the three failures that highlight the story:

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