I know I said I'd finished the next chapter, but I decided I wanted to write a scene in this chapter, and that meant I'd need to finish the day instead of finishing it in another chapter.

Sooo I hope a 5k + chapter isn't too much

So, the next chapter is complete at a healthy 2.5k words.

It's also an unhealthy, unedited mess so give me some time on that.

Dealing with Tempest's discovery of the results of a Pinkie Heart Song, and Twilight getting to her old/ new Treehouse.

The question is, as a tribute to the Time Loops series, should I also blow up the Treebary at some point?

Sorry for being quiet.

Some great games have released or been updated.

Playing a lot of Darktide, thanks to the update, it's a good bit better, and Warhammer Rogue Trader is a good amount of fun.

As for story progress ...

I probably have another chapter!

But following my own rules, I'll give it a re-read later, after asleep so it's not 4 am common sense. It's also only at 1.7k words, so I might add in another segment.

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Sorry for being quiet, work was hell but I fixed it.

As an update,
1/3 of Rainbow Point Paradox is written (Aj's segment)
1 scene left in Beneath a Princess, and probably another rewrite of the ending.

Also need to resist the urge to start a 4th and 5th story XD (Post Apocalypse Sunset story, and a Branching Twilight story)

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Chryie has an update next chapter, if you want to read it, it's down below.

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So the 3rd chapter for Beneath a Princess is currently longer than chapters 1 and 2 combined, and I wanted a break.

Here is a brief snippet from the next chapter of RPP, no it's not proofwritten, sorry in advance.

Rarity tapped Twilight on the shoulder,

“Yes Rarity, oh right sorry.”

Rarity leveled her most unimpressed stare at the purple filly before she began to gesture at her horn, wings, and mouth.

“I err, I’m not sure?”

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So I think I've finished chapter 2 of RPP, but I'm leaving it till later so I can get sleep and give it a re-read with better focus.

Here's a little segment.

She was falling.

Fluttershy was not the terrible flyer she used to be but as she plummeted towards the ground in an uncontrolled spin, she found her wings had frozen to her side.

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