First of all, I'd like to thank you all for the helpful feedback! I went over the existing chapters and made a few small edits, mainly in chapter 4.
I'll openly admit I slipped up a bit in that chapter^^
I've had chapter 10 finished for a couple days, but I was waiting for more feedback before posting it.
I figured this would be a good way to inform everyone that I had done some rewriting, since anyone who was interested would be tracking the story.

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Hello everyone! I am very pleased to announce that my first ever MLP fan-fic has finally gotten through moderation and is now live!
I would like to say, I am VERY open to re-writing parts of it if a majority of readers think it needs it.
I am primarily an animator and game maker, and so I am not really used to exclusively using text to tell a story.
Please feel free to criticize my work, but also please remember that I am fairly new to the fan-fic scene.

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