Well, I'll say the clop wasn't great but it also wasn't bad either.
Anyway, I'm quite happy with the result more or less...

And yes, got feedbacks too.
I had a lot of drawbacks, such example will be : Grammar!
Yep, need a proof-reader soon enough.
I just got a lot of idea, but no idea how to write it.
Maybe if I just gave out the idea to someone else?
Yeh, that works. Maybe?

Stay safe and sound, everypony.