And it finishes with a To Be Concluded. It ties into Chapter Three of Chaos Theory, which will go up later tonight.

All the pieces have been set, and now the game begins.

I had a commenter mention Azatoth, the Blind Idiot god of Lovecraft's Cthulhu mythos. Now, I like Call of Cthulhu as much as the next RPG nerdette, but I'm not going to tap Cthonans for my stories.

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Just posted the chapter for Raison. And it spells a change in the course of the Sirens, and I really would like feedback on this one. Not grammatical or syntax checks, though. Overall ideas. Thoughts. First impressions. Reread Aria's first chapter if you have to for a better overall sense.

I really need thoughts on this, guys.

I've thought it over, and I'm apparently going to have to upset Aria's worldview.

Now I just have to decide if it's Adagio or Sonata that is the person that triggers it.

I really don't like being dark and gritty...it ruined a LOT of what could have been good movies and comics in the last decade.

In other news, DAY OFF!!!!

And it ended with a joke.

I've got two chapters of Chaos Theory finished that I'm polishing thanks to my proofreaders. I'll likely start posting after I finish Raison d'Etre.

Which brings me to the topic at hand.

Aria is in a very dark place and is addicted to something that she can recognize isn't a healthy outlet. But, because of her depression and cyclical anger, it's going to take a big kick to get her to change.

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I have started Aria's story four times over the last few days and deleted the entire thing shortly into it because it's just preposterous.

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