Ok, I hate to admit it, but... · 8:49pm Jun 15th, 2017
... I'm cringing at my own story.
Compared to my "Formation" story on Fanfiction.NET, "The Newest Displacer", in the beginning, that is, sucks enough ass to literally create a whirlpool of cringe or a tornado of shit.
Given I did have some help from my buddy DragShot on Fanfiction.NET for "Formation" (specifically editing it and being a pre-reader of sorts for me), but still.