Hey, so I've been inspired recently to revisit this story, and so have made a few changes to the story as you know it (or don't).

The short version is that the end of the first chapter is significantly different(ish), and I now have a plan for the overall story. So, yay for that I suppose. I'll be publishing the second chapter here in a few days (or maybe later tonight) as able. This should be good, if I can get it out of my head before I lose my inspiration.

So, enjoy.