I'd like some feedback on my story A World in Chaos.

Since I started writing it again I haven't gotten a since comment so I'd like to know how it's going and what you think.

After a year of hiatus I've started World in Chaos again.

Just need a reader, please. Thanks. PM me

Finished editing the story, but it's not finished.

I will be adding/removing things from the first half of the first chapter (again) and then I'll be working a little on the sequel.

I got permission from another author and am going to change the end of chapter True Home, sorry to my dedicated readers but now the plot will thicken.

Finished the last chapter of Chaos days ago and didn't click ONE button... I was wondering why I didn't get any comments.

A World in Chaos is a great story but I only have one commenter... I know it can't be that perfect and if it is then please, LET ME KNOW and in direct result let others who read comments to see if a story is worth it (like me) know what you think.

Sun Struck is a great commenter, but I know I have at least five other ponies out there who would love me to get a featured story. Right?

90 views, one month into publication.
One down vote.

Obviously someone didn't read the story.

I need a pre and proof reader for A World In Chaos.

Skilled people need only apply. :)

Also, you will have early access to every chapter in progress so that comes with the responsibility of both keeping it secret and giving honest objective opinions about the chapter.

Thanks

I was almost ready to post the next chapter of discord however right now I'm at work and I really think a lot about my writing.

I strongly believe I should wait, maybe even a week, before I post the next chapter just because I want there to be more. ..
detail and feeling to it.

I need a couple of my readers to weigh in their opinions.

I'm having *gasp* writers block.

I know where I want the story to go but I'm debating having first person stories or teams as the story progresses for the next few chapters.

Please! I need your help! Make your opinions known!!!