Chapters updated · 2:27pm Jun 26th, 2016
Thanks to a fantastic proof reader, Berry Delight, I've got grammatically correct chapters and that means we're that much closer to having a book published!!!
Thanks to a fantastic proof reader, Berry Delight, I've got grammatically correct chapters and that means we're that much closer to having a book published!!!
My first adventure story just passed 1,400 views.
About 600, give or take, have finished the whole thing, not taking into account all those who downloaded it and read it on their own time, like I do for so many.
Thank you all and someday I'll publish it into a book.
First I need it proof read, though.
The new episode coming up, the ONE HOUR SEASON FINALE, is going to get my story, A world without a rainboom, a lotta new viewers. I need anyone able to read it and tell me ANYTHING wrong with it to help me out. CHapter one I'm touching up, so that one isn't important yet. Plus it's 90% awesome and 20% cooler than it was when I first wrote it.
Thanks and HMU with any questions you have and ESPECIALLY criticisms.
HO-LY-SHIT.
Chills. I didn't blink through the whole thing.
AND IT'S LIKE MY FIRST ADVENTURE STORY!
I'm terrified and excited to see the parallels and story unfold.
Well 80,000 words was huge milestone back in the day. Took me weeks. Now I can pump them out in a week, if I'm ready and available. I'm updating the battle with Nightmare Moon.
I've split it into two chapters and should have it done by tomorrow afternoon. So, check back when I update it, I'll post a blog when it is.
1001 registered users and 8043 global readers.
I can't believe that this' happened. This' amazing to wake up to.
My story has broken 1000. Last night when I was asleep.
OMG.
I can't even...
Thanks to you all!
THE battle into Canterlot fills in how and what happened with shining armor and his soldiers between the time he rallies the troops and arrived in the throne room a moment to late.
Adding a chapter soon wherein Shining armor charges Canterlot and gets into the castle, filling in the gap wherein he disappeared for nearly an hour of the battle, only to show up at the end.
I changed the rating and removed the dark tag.
I read the rules and I can rate it everyone because it's a general adventure! More readers! YAY!
New Chapter.
Set between Legion and Loss and Stronghold in the Everfree
http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/832627
http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/832627
http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/832627
Read and tell me what you think.
So, I'm gonna add details to the story I kinda rushed over.
I split the battle with Nightmare moon chapter and I'll be adding a chapter between them with a battle scene or two.
I don't REALLY have a plan so we'll see how it goes together!
Chapter one of rainboom is now listed with more immersive context, dialogue, and plot.
Check it out, it's better! !
My current Magnum Opus has a preface now.
That's all.
I have readers around the world!
Germany, Mexico, South America.
A World Without a Rainboom has gone global!
Spread the world on how great it is!
I wrote a world without a rainboom workout a proof reader.
Any experienced ponies interested?
We're talking the whole thing though.
Maybe a collaboration between a couple of you?
Chapter one of A world without a rainboom could have been is own stand alone story...
494 views on AWWARB
That's almost 500!
If anypony has free time I'd appreciate artwork on AWWARB, it's currently my best story and I think it has 'featured' written all over it.
Lol. So, I was almost asleep after a 17 hour day at work when I came up with the name for the sequel.. Changing it, you'll see when it's posted.
I'm taking the Completed title off and adding a few chapters because I want to see how it feels for them to live a few weeks in the sun again before the beginning of the next book.
Keep your eyes peeled, cuz I'm hoping it'll be as awesome as Rainbow Dash doing a sonic rainboom for Scootaloo on her graduation day from flight school!