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Jun
26th
2016

Chapters updated · 2:27pm Jun 26th, 2016

Thanks to a fantastic proof reader, Berry Delight, I've got grammatically correct chapters and that means we're that much closer to having a book published!!!

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Jun
11th
2016

1400 views! · 3:47am Jun 11th, 2016

My first adventure story just passed 1,400 views.
About 600, give or take, have finished the whole thing, not taking into account all those who downloaded it and read it on their own time, like I do for so many.

Thank you all and someday I'll publish it into a book.

First I need it proof read, though.

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Nov
25th
2015

ALL HANDS ON DECK! · 2:27am Nov 25th, 2015

The new episode coming up, the ONE HOUR SEASON FINALE, is going to get my story, A world without a rainboom, a lotta new viewers. I need anyone able to read it and tell me ANYTHING wrong with it to help me out. CHapter one I'm touching up, so that one isn't important yet. Plus it's 90% awesome and 20% cooler than it was when I first wrote it.

Thanks and HMU with any questions you have and ESPECIALLY criticisms.

Read More

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Nov
24th
2015

I feel so CONFLICTED · 10:25pm Nov 24th, 2015

HO-LY-SHIT.

Chills. I didn't blink through the whole thing.

AND IT'S LIKE MY FIRST ADVENTURE STORY!

I'm terrified and excited to see the parallels and story unfold.

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Nov
1st
2015

Updating the ultimate battle in my first big story · 1:21am Nov 1st, 2015

Well 80,000 words was huge milestone back in the day. Took me weeks. Now I can pump them out in a week, if I'm ready and available. I'm updating the battle with Nightmare Moon.

I've split it into two chapters and should have it done by tomorrow afternoon. So, check back when I update it, I'll post a blog when it is.

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Oct
28th
2015

1001 · 4:36pm Oct 28th, 2015

1001 registered users and 8043 global readers.

I can't believe that this' happened. This' amazing to wake up to.

My story has broken 1000. Last night when I was asleep.

OMG.

I can't even...

Thanks to you all!

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Oct
26th
2015

New Chapter Added · 6:50am Oct 26th, 2015

THE battle into Canterlot fills in how and what happened with shining armor and his soldiers between the time he rallies the troops and arrived in the throne room a moment to late.

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Oct
25th
2015

Rainboom battle! · 4:20pm Oct 25th, 2015

Adding a chapter soon wherein Shining armor charges Canterlot and gets into the castle, filling in the gap wherein he disappeared for nearly an hour of the battle, only to show up at the end.

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Sep
8th
2015

A World Without a Rainboom Update!!! · 6:34pm Sep 8th, 2015

I changed the rating and removed the dark tag.

I read the rules and I can rate it everyone because it's a general adventure! More readers! YAY!

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Sep
7th
2015

Rainboom update · 2:15am Sep 7th, 2015

New Chapter.

Set between Legion and Loss and Stronghold in the Everfree

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/832627
http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/832627
http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/832627

Read and tell me what you think.

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Sep
4th
2015

Rainboom · 2:57am Sep 4th, 2015

So, I'm gonna add details to the story I kinda rushed over.

I split the battle with Nightmare moon chapter and I'll be adding a chapter between them with a battle scene or two.

I don't REALLY have a plan so we'll see how it goes together!

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Aug
8th
2015

2/3 done · 2:49am Aug 8th, 2015

Chapter one of rainboom is now listed with more immersive context, dialogue, and plot.

Check it out, it's better! !

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Aug
2nd
2015

Minor chapter to Rainboom · 7:02am Aug 2nd, 2015

My current Magnum Opus has a preface now.

That's all.

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Jul
15th
2015

Holy Guacamole · 10:10pm Jul 15th, 2015

I have readers around the world!

Germany, Mexico, South America.

A World Without a Rainboom has gone global!

Spread the world on how great it is!

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Jul
2nd
2015

Rainboom proofer · 5:35am Jul 2nd, 2015

I wrote a world without a rainboom workout a proof reader.

Any experienced ponies interested?

We're talking the whole thing though.

Maybe a collaboration between a couple of you?

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Jun
28th
2015

I just realized · 4:10pm Jun 28th, 2015

Chapter one of A world without a rainboom could have been is own stand alone story...

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Jun
28th
2015

Omg omg omg · 1:43am Jun 28th, 2015

494 views on AWWARB

That's almost 500!

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Jun
27th
2015

Artists? · 2:25pm Jun 27th, 2015

If anypony has free time I'd appreciate artwork on AWWARB, it's currently my best story and I think it has 'featured' written all over it.

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May
26th
2015

title change · 2:02pm May 26th, 2015

Lol. So, I was almost asleep after a 17 hour day at work when I came up with the name for the sequel.. Changing it, you'll see when it's posted. :derpytongue2:

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May
22nd
2015

A world without a Rainboom Update · 4:36am May 22nd, 2015

I'm taking the Completed title off and adding a few chapters because I want to see how it feels for them to live a few weeks in the sun again before the beginning of the next book.

Keep your eyes peeled, cuz I'm hoping it'll be as awesome as Rainbow Dash doing a sonic rainboom for Scootaloo on her graduation day from flight school!

:scootangel::rainbowdetermined2:

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