So chapter five is preeety much ready to go. Only problem is I need to get it edited. I feel like this time I'm going to have it read and revised by multiple sources instead of just one. Not that there's ANYTHING wrong with Malefactory, he's awesome! I want his editing expertise as well

I'm still doin' chapter five, I promise. Not that anyone has bugged me at all, I'm just sayin' this for my own benefit.

Don't worry, Chapter five is still a thing. I'm halfway through with it but I'm just a bit tired of writing right now. Still gonna do it though.

It's been brought to my attention that I need to tell the reader more of what's going on around Orange Crush rather than just getting to the point of the plot. Not that there's anything wrong with getting to the point, but I have a bad habit of being very bland.
Also, I'm not saying that I'm doing a bad job, more-so that I can do a better job.

What do you guys think so far? Is the story easy to follow? If not, what can I do to improve and how do I go about it? The reason I ask these questions is because I want to make this story enjoyable for both you and me. I know that when I read something that is too fast or has poor character development, I REALLY want the opportunity to help make it better. So, against my better judgement, help me to make Orange Crush gets a Crush a better read! (Unless by some chance it's perfect, then get

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It took me FOREVER, but I finally found the motivation to write again! But, as much as I want to, I can't release chapter three until it gets revised further. So YAAAAAA. Oh, and also, I think that the few people that have read mah storeh are gonna like this chapter!