Hey! So I'm going through and editing a lot of my older works. AHL is second up (behind TCRAW). However, I did remember something that bugged me about the story. The pacing was pretty sloppy in places.

Are there any places in AHL you'd like to see expanded upon? Like where I could have added in another section/chapter? I can't remember since it's been AGES since I wrote the dang thing. I'll likely find some spots myself, but I want to hear the reader's opinions on the matter.

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The early morning still remained thick over the orchardgrass, soaking Applejack’s hocks and bestowing an unnatural gleam to her cracked hooves. Judging from the sunlight poking through the trees, it looked to be yet another scorcher. Generally a morning like this sent her into an almost frenzied hurry to “work while it’s tolerable,” but not today. Today all she desired was to curl up under an apple tree and think.

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