I like that people are liking/disliking my short story. I just wish that the dislikes, and likes for that matter, would come with a comment on why. Maybe some tips on ways to improve. Seeing as how I've just started writing, it might help.
I wanted to post my alternate ending to Pegasus Device, but now I'm reconsidering. I'll give this one a little more time and see what happens.

Thanks to those who did like it.

To all, have a good weekend.