My good friend Anon had looked over the fanfic and provided me with an updated version of it.

Enjoy.

I am going to post a rewritten very shortly. Tell me what you think

A simple test was rejected. Am I sad? No. Am I mad? No. Why? Because the reasons were solid and sound, and in short, I should have asked my editors to have looked it over first before sending it in. All I can say is next time I hope I can present a better story that will pass.

Also I type this, on August 10th, I am 22 years old now. Happy birthday to me!

I just touched it up so go take a look!

And here comes the question, is that should I post it now or wait until I get more of the idea thought out and planned, along with someone that could help me?