Question regarding my story "Keeper of Mira Virtus" · 6:21am May 25th, 2014
I am stuck in a hole writing Keeper of Mira Vitrus, and I need to ask a question regarding this story. Should I have Turbo and his friends go straight to the Summer Sun Celebration, or should I add some character development with his friends, like having them go to a bar, or something, and have the Summer Sun Celebration later?