Concerns with Memory Lock · 7:37am Aug 29th, 2015
Arguably the better of the two stories I have posted here, Memory Lock is my own personal brain child. The story has been thought out on countless notebook paper, and copious amounts of crumpled notes sitting in a recycling center somewhere. However, no matter how much I love this project, I am not happy with it. It is poor quality. An amateurish piece of jumbled words and sentences. The grammar is bad, things are often repeated, and it is overall cringe worthy. This is why I have just