Still many errors and mistakes that need to be fixed.

Feel free to look through and point out the errors, other than the couples like some people .

While it wasn't perfect, it turned out well for an experiment.

Main things that need to be worked on is Grammar and a more detail for each character.

Anyone up for reading and giving some pointers?

I think it's time to edit a story. Been thinking of either leaving it alone or editing it. While this second version has done much better, I do feel that it's time for it's edit. Take a look and provide ideas.
I swear, if I hear one more complaint about something I will hunt down those people and bash them with "said" something.

Man I still have anger issues at times.

More of a prequel to A Great Day?

I've decided to do a story from Spike's POV leading up to A Great Day. It will be told from Spike's POV, so we'll finally see how it began.
I might also do one from Sweetie Belle's POV doing the same thing.

Any of my followers that are Spike fans willing to help? Need the help with a few details.

Before you do decide, might I suggest that you read A Great Day to know what's going on.

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I couldn't resist on the title. I would like to announce I will be doing a Side Story to A Great Day. It will be for a contest, so I plan to make it good. I have the title and description done, along with the characters that will appear. Now, the time has come to write the story. This will not be easy, considering who I'm going up against.

The Sequel is almost ready. Just having it looked over.

the second chapter is under construction. I'll have it back up ASAP.